Finished Piece

Now that myself and Harrison have finished our opening scene, we gave in the clip and had it analysed by our teachers. He was pleased to see we had taken his comments into consideration and re shot the end of our film in order to build up more tension. His only comment for us to improve our finished film further was to add more titles in. We tried doing this after school but unfortunately the programme would not let us edit the titles meaning we could not add any extras in. This was not too much of an issue as the teacher had said the film was at a good standard anyway, the titles were just to boost the marks up.